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PostSubject: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 5:15 pm

Plot: An army base has captured an alien, and began experimenting on it.
setting: The army base.

Private Jones: Captain, we need your assistance with something, pronto!

Captain Logan: Okay, Private.
((They both walk through a quarantine))

Jones: Cap, we think it's having a reaction to one of the chemicals we've given it.
((both walk up to a steel plated cage but not before grabbing a m14))

((Logan looks at the alien. Description: It had bloody spikes sprouting from its back, reason because they feed it living sheep. It's eyes bulge from it's head, which is a dark-green, blackish mix. His fangs are as sharp as razor-blades, and it has a long, triceratops-like tail. It is about 3 ft tall, and 6 ft long.))

Logan: Wow, it looks so different from the last time I saw it. It's grown pretty big.

Jones: Sir, look.
((They both stare in awe as it moves to the back of the cage, and starts to bang on it.))

Logan: Everybody, get your guns ready, it might get out!

Scientist 1: Sir, it can't, this cage is plat-
((The sound of metal bending fills the air))

Logan: BRACE THE BACK OF THE CAGE, NOW!
((The soldiers line up at the back of the cage, guns ready))

Logan: Hold your fire until it gets out, it's through the first sheet of steel.
((It is silent.))

Logan: Steady...
((The alien bursts forth from the cage, eyes filled with rage.))

Logan: FIRE!
((Soldiers start firing at it, but the bullets bounce off. It opens its huge mouth, and starts to attack a soldier))

Soldier 1: HELP, IT'S ON ME, GET IT OFF GE-
((Alien bites his neck, and the soldiers stop shooting. It lets out a roar, followed by a 'Chk Chk Chk' As it jumps from the choking soldier, and runs from the quarantine. Medics rush to the wounded soldiers side.))

Logan: Dear god, what have we done.


Part 2

setting: New york city

Plot: The news has found out, but the government wants it secret.

News caster 1: We have shocking news. It seems that an alien in captivity has escaped from it's quarantine and is loose.

News caster 2: Wait. I'm getting it in that this was just a joke, and isn't real. Too bad, Joan. You won't be seeing your brother anytime soon.

News caster 1: Good one Jeff..
((Andrew turn off the T.V))

Andrew: Do you really think it's a cover up?
((Picks up a plate of scrambled eggs and sits at the table.))

Mom: Maybe. But I don't really believe in aliens, so I think it was a prank.

Andrew: Good point. There may be someone out there, but we haven't found them yet.

((Meanwhile, at the base, The president shows up. ((Not bush))))

President: Captain Logan, come here.

Logan: Yes sir?

President: Give me a short brief of what happened here.
((He looks around at the bent metal, and the blood stains on the ground.))

Logan: Well, it had a reaction to one of the chemicals. It somehow broke through the cage, and killed a man, then escaped. We've sent out recons on ground, water and air to try and get it.

President: Good.

Logan: Sir, we think it is heading for New York. It seems it wants more human blood, and it wants lots. It probably smelled the scent of humans, and started to head that way. We've set up road blocks to try and stop it.

President: Let's just hope it works.
((Road block one))

Blocker 1: Man, this is bogus. There's no such things as aliens.

Blocker 2: Haha, true, so true.

((Blocker 3 looks down the road.))

Blocker 3: Hey, look at this.
((They all look down the road, and see a trail of dust nearing.))

Blocker 1: Probably just a ca-

Blocker 2: WHOA!
((The alien goes underground, and starts burrowing towards them. Blocker 2 runs to the walkie-talkie.))

Blocker 2: We have contact, it is nearing, send reinforcements!
((Logan picks up his))

Logan: Help is on the way!

President: What happened?

Logan: Contact at road block one, get in!
((They both climb into a hum-v))

Blocker 1: What the hell is this?!
((Alien emerges from the ground, roaring.))

Blocker 2: OH MY GOD, SHOOT IT!
((They all start shooting at it, but it tackles Blocker 2))

Blocker 2: Oh my god, help me, hel-
((Alien bites him, and grows a little bigger.))

((Blocker 1 runs to the walkie-talkie))

Blocker 1: MAN DOWN, MAN DOWN, WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU GUYS?!
((Transmition cuts off.))

((The reinforcements arrive, but too late.))

Logan: Oh..My...God...
((They get out of the car.))

Logan: We have to catch it now.
((He lifts his head, and looks at the 10ft wide dents in the road.))

part 3
setting:NYC

plot: They tell the new yorkers.

News lady: The mayor has ordered that all people come to central park for an important meeting.

Andrew: Well, mom. Come on, we gotta go.

Mom: Okay, just wait.
((She puts her coat on, and they go out the door. They arrive at central park))

Mayor: We have been alerted that we must evacuate the city. An unknown thing is heading for the city, and we have to evacuate. Army's orders.
((Panic starts))

Mayor: Just go downtown in an orderly fashion so we can board the helicopters.

((The army chasing the thing))

Logan: We have to catch it before it reaches New York! It will kill thousands of people!

President: What chemical did you give it...

Logan: That doesn't matter, we have to kill it.

President: It might be the one thing that can kill it.

Logan: We gave it sodium chloride.

President: Okay. Order atleast a barge-full.

Logan: But that wou-

President: What's millions of dollars against thousands of lives...


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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 5:43 pm

nice............................................................................................
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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 5:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 5:52 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 6:57 pm

I slacked on part 3
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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:45 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sun Jan 27, 2008 8:59 pm

Olo, too many words!!!T'was good, though I only read ppart of it

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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The experiment ((A story with updates))   Sat Feb 02, 2008 10:54 am

thats one sweet story.

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